I bemoan my demon,
who devours my candour,
withdraws my promise,
from temples my anger,
life vomits my rage,
expels my façade,
breaks up my dreams,
and shatters my heart.
I bemoan my demon,
who devours my candour,
withdraws my promise,
from temples my anger,
life vomits my rage,
expels my façade,
breaks up my dreams,
and shatters my heart.
April 18th, 2012 at 11:59 pm
Hope that you can vanquish all the demons in your mind:)
April 19th, 2012 at 12:36 am
We always conjure up our own demons – enjoying your poems a lot!
April 28th, 2012 at 8:37 am
I like this….It makes me feel.
April 28th, 2012 at 8:42 am
Thank you. It’s quite grimy, eh. I wrote it a long time ago but like the mantra of ‘my’ on every line so put it up…
April 28th, 2012 at 8:45 am
Grimy? I do not think it grimy at all. I like it very much…
April 28th, 2012 at 8:53 am
Sorry, I meant grimy as in short, sharp, rhythm and rhyme. Grime. Thank you for reading!
April 28th, 2012 at 8:54 am
Well then, I will agree with your statement. I suppose some things really do get lost in translation.